Your soul is heavy
Like a waning typhoon
Clumsy
Like a rookie ballerina
Taunted by the applause
Never heard
Your beauty is hidden
In the cloak of your flesh
Your mind wavers
Unstable as the clarity of a bubble
But I adore you
Every bit that make you up
For what am I but
A bag of baggages
© GBOLABO ADETUNJI/ AYOKA
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Flawed Ppl have lots of love to offer….
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That is true. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Have a beautiful day!
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I love this line!!! Unstable as the clarity of a bubble. Brilliant!
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Thanks for visiting. I appreciate your kind words. Have a lovely day .
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Truly beautiful and really touched me!
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Thank you!. Have a lovely day.
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You also
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Hi! I nominated you for the 3 days quote challenge. You are not obligated to participate but I hope you accept. Thank you! https://harlife.wordpress.com/2016/10/15/day-1-three-day-quote-challenge/
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Thanks for the nomination. I will check out the link also. Have a beautiful day.
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We are all flawed people who desire to love and be loved.
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Yes we are. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Have a blessed day.
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Your blog has one of the richest poetry I have read on WordPress. Following you.
Thanks for visiting my blog.
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Haha. You are too kind. Thank you for stopping by and for your comment. There are so many other beautiful blogs on here. I will check out your blog. Have a wonderful day.
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Wow what an awesome poem. So much depth. 👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Thank you for your kind words. Have a lovely day.
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I simply love this!
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I am glad you love it. Thank you for stopping by. Have a beautiful day.
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Thank you and same to you. Your blog is lovely. 🙂
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Oh it touched my heart. So beautifully written.👍👌👍👌👍
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I am glad it touched your heart. Thanks for stopping by. Have a wonderful day.
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You’re always welcome friend. Have a nice day.
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Absolutely beautiful! It’s like looking at my thoughts in the mirror, and watching them look more beautiful than they looked in my head.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your feedback. Have a lovely day.
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Lovely poem & beautiful quote!
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Thank you.
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