I wish to know
How you found your peace
How you discovered the courage
That puts you to slumber at dark
I am dying to find
The deities that smiled at your eyes
That told their lids to shut untethered
How your mind finds restrain
To the corners of your crib
As mine travels
To yesterday, tomorrow and where
I wish to see
Why the night choose you
As its golden child
Why you die every night
Like a timber of wood
And wake up reborn
Like a term neonate
Whilst I march to the labor camp
Thinking I lay my head to rest
I wish to know how you got to Eden
In solitude
While I languish in Goshen
Unhinged
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Seye, I saw something good at “Eden”.
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Quite wonderful 🌷
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Thank you so much!😊🌼💕🌸💕
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Some people have to deal with so much pain that they have to treat each morning as a rebirth. They won’t be able to breathe otherwise.
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So true. Thank you for your support. ☺🌸😀🌸💞💕
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You are welcome Gbolabo 😊
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It’s all about committing everything into the hands of the owner of the universe, that has power over everything including our hearts, eyes.
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Thank you sir.I appreciate your comment. ☺😀☺
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Thanks master! More grease to hour elbow and best wishes!
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Beautiful words. Thank you. Kenza.
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Thank you Kenza. ☺🌸😀🌺💞💕
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Lovely! I see a child sleeping here,that wonderful peaceful sleep of a young child. As adults our mental journeys to the past and to the future can rob us of that peace. Such nice writing as always.Thank you.
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Lovely! ❤
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Gbolabo, thank you for following our blog. May you be blessed.
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Gerald and Alida, you are both welcome. You have an amazing blog. Remain blessed.🙏☺💞😀🎶💕
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Lovely words! 💙
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Thank you Diana, happy Friday!🌸☺🌹😍🌼😀🍁💕🍂
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You’re utmost welcome and thank you! I trust that you’re having a great weekend! 😄
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Chaos and calm juxtaposed! Profound words.
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☺ Thank you so much. 💕
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Nice.. Great job
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🙏 Thank you.
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If you can ask this questions is great detail I believe your on the road to find out,if not already
Thank you for your consideration
See you on the other side of creativity As Sheldon Mostly
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Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion☺
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That’s a beautiful poem.
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Thank you 😍
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You have a nice blog and some great posts. Can you please visit my blog and give your valuable feedback on it?
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Thank you so much. I will check out your blog as well.😀
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Thank you so much😀
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My friend, I nominated you for the Liebster Award. If you cannot participate, it is no problem whatsoever! Here is my link to where your blog is posted: (My IPAD has been uncooperative, lately, so I hope link works)! Big hugs from Tamara
https://tyancosky.wordpress.com/2018/06/04/liebster-award-yancosky/
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Thank you so much😍x💕x❤
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My pleasure! Thank you for sharing your lovely blog ❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautifully written.
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😍 Thank you❤💕
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Beautiful words !! You often leave the readers admiring the thoughts shared
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Thank you so much!! You always leave beautiful comments. I deeply appreciate it🙏🏽😀
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!🙏🏾😀
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Sweet n nice poem.i like specially”I wish ,why d night choose you,………..whilst i march to labor camp,thinking i lay my head to rest”wonderful.
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What a beautiful poem. And how true. The only way I can sleep is to listen to a book until I fall asleep. To keep my thoughts occupied..Perhaps babies are listening to the sounds around them and using them to lull them into dreams. Or perhaps it is just that they don’t have much of a past to regret.
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Thank you Judy ❤️so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I also wonder what trick babies use😀. Listening to good music works for me too. Have a wonderful day😍
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Love that form — the reader-friendly line structure. And the final stanza 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate your feedback😀
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This is fantastic. I mean it
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Thank you so much for reading. I deeply appreciate your comment 🙂
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Lovely poem. Beautifully written. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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😍Thanks for reading. You have an awesome blog. ❤️
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BTW, this is a stunning photo you have chosen!
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😍Thank you for looking😀
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Excellent writing!
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😍Thank you!
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Really good! Love this one! You have a great talent! Also love the pic you chose for this poem.
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Thank you, Racheal for your generous comments. I deeply appreciate the support. 😍❤
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GREAT STUFF!!!
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