I was told
I am the sole captain
Of my ship
The chief architect
Of my building
Did they not say
If I fail
If I succeed
I will be praised
I will be blamed
It will all be
My own making
I charted a course
I set my sail
I gave my life
A sense of direction
But here am I
In strange waters
Here I am
In parallel strokes
With unknown sharks
Here am I
Lurking between
Unseen reefs
Swirling between
Unfriendly eels
Despite
All my preparation
Life happens
Notwithstanding
All my determination
Plans fail
Here am I
Lost ashore
I cannot cry
Salt water stings
More than my tears
Why try cry
The shades of twilight
Are soon to be swallowed
By trenches of gloom
Am I alive
It’s still so painful
Pain is a sign
A symptom of life
Death is yet a myth
Shrouded in reality
Is it my strides
Is it just life
Is it all right
Is it alright
To leap and land
In the very same
Lost spot
I am alive
There is work
To stay afloat
The storms are happy
Those storms
They’re going nowhere
I ‘ve got places to go
I’ll go
With my scars
I’ll go
With all the pains
I’ll go
Without the past
Good
Or bad
I’ll live my life the fullest
I will pursue a rescue
I will purchase a cure
I will peruse sustenance
I’ll cling on to something
If there be nothing
I’ll hold
On to perspective
The waves have wheels
I just need to pedal
Obstacles have springboards
I just need to launch
Rafts can ride the storms
I just need to hold fast
There is a shore at sight
I just need to wipe my tears
image credit viable anna waldherr

A beautiful post, Gbolabo. It brought tears to my eyes. ❤
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Thank you, Anna.🌼💕🌸
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Love the inspiration. We all need to keep pushing, keep going, keep climbing. One day we will be at the top of the mountain.. Love it. Very nice
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Thank you my friend. ☺
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U wlc
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Too many times we forget that so much is beyond our control, despite the American emphasis on self-reliance. So I hope you have some others around helping you fight off the sharks and help you get back to dry land.
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Thank you, Elizabeth. 🍁🌺🌷
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You are welcome. May your year go well.
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I wish you the same. Thanks! ☺
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Definitely there will a shore
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Thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts. You have an awesome blog.
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Welcome dear. Thank you too. Very appreciative
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I like your style in that you wander into so many personal corners and angles and the reader is therefore left to confront their own issues with the life we a dealt with and in the process imitate the positive outlook required to weather the storms embodied in your metaphor of discovery. Always love your work.
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Sometimes, the world beats us down. Our bosses, our lovers, our friends and our coaches tell us we are not good enough. We hear it so often and it finally gets to us. Just as we are beginning to ask ourselves if the world is right, a random bird perches on our shoulders and whispers, “The world is not complete without you.” Then only, our resolve and energy are refreshed.
Thank you for your kind comment. Reading this made my day.
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So beautiful!!! The kind of motivation we all need.
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Thank you Mariam. Happy New Year !
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Happy New Year to you too.
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This is so beautiful and it came at the right time while I’m currently pondering my next move. Thanks for the inspiration. God bless you.
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Your words are beautiful as rose petals on a lush greenery. Thank you!
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You’re utmost welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful and inspiring.
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Thank you so much, Malcolm.
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Awesome.
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Thank you!
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This is a beautiful life epic, and I like the way you altered the spacing near the end. 😊
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure. You’re a wonderful and thoughtful poet. Your compliments mean a lot to me. Thank you!
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Beautiful piece. It’s been a while with you, Gbolabo. Hope you are doing great. 🙂
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Thank you so much. I am doing great. I hope you are too. 🌼🌺🌸
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Our God is an awesomely great God !!
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Yes. He is!
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Hallelujah !!
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Nice…
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You don’t put the blame on others, what happens to you and around you. It’s your own making. Thanks for sharing.
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No matter what happens to us, we should learn not to shift blame, rather we should learn to accept responsibilities.
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Well, I’m an instant follower!
Also, I’m reblogging this and the gun god poem to Success Inspirers World.
Damn. You go! 😎
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS STYLE OF POEM LITERALLY MIMICS THE SITUATION PICTURED—A MOMENT-BY-MOMENT SUSPENSE STORY! GREAT WORK!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful post !!
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Thank you!
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This is an incredible and powerful poem. Thank you! I love this line: “If there be nothing I’ll hold on to perspective.” and I also love the end.
I also really appreciate the main photo for your blog – it is touching and kind. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Blessings,
Debbie
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Thank you so much. You are so kind. I feel uplifted with your comment. Have a wonderful day.🌸🌺🌼🎈💞
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Your poem went straight to my heart. Your words are beautiful and powerful. Keep on sharing them !
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Thank you for reading. Your comment made my day. 🌺🌹🌼
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I feel the helplessness and I love the determination to get out of the situation.
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You are so kind. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. ☺💕😀💕
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Thanks too
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I love these lines:
“Pain is a sign
A symptom of life”
Best wishes.
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Thank you so much😀 x❤x💕
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I love your work. You are a amazing writer and storyteller.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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