Stop mooning about
Even the moon goes around
Busy as the bee
Stop loafing around
Life bakes a loaf of those
Who are indolent
Stop idling your mind
Carving for your hands
A recipe for regret
Stop moping around
You are the goddess
Of fortune and failures
Stop lounging away
Why pay more tariffs
To the demons of delay
GBOLABO ADETUNJI/ AYOKA
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Stop moping around
You are the goddess
Of fortune and failures
Wonderful sentiment ^^. I enjoyed this piece thoroughly, thank you for sharing!
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I am thrilled you like it. Thanks!
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amazing poem..thanx for sharing..:-)
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Thank you! I’m glad you like it.
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Wonderful, inspirational message. Well said!
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Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
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Thanks very much for following my blog. It is appreciated.
Best wishes, Pete.
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You are welcome. You have an awesome blog. I see that you love challenges. I am always looking for something different. Yours is unique and the posts I have seen are interesting.Have a wonderful day!
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This is my first challenge! It’s a lot of work! Thanks for your kind words.
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Why pay more tariffs
To the demons of delay …Loved this!!! And all of the poem.
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I am glad you love it. Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day.🌻
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You are welcome.
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Stop lounging away
Why pay more tariffs
To the demons of delay
I definitely need to stop lounging away. Thank you for this and have a great day!
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Do you? Lol. You are welcome. Have a wonderful day!🌼
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Ah, yes, I do. I’ve been lounging off, making myself too comfortable when I still have lots of work to get done. Thank you and same to you. 🙂
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I love this. Wonderful advice and so poetic. 🙂
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I am glad you love it. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
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It’s beautiful !!
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Thank you! Have a beautiful day. 💐
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Thanks Ayoka !!
Same to you ☺
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Love the play of word with moon and loaf.
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Thank you for reading, Elizabeth. Have a lovely day. Hope it doesn’t get too humid. 🌹
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Enjoyed this very much. I love the word lollygagging and I have not heard nor seen it for years. Thank you!
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Yes, it’s probably archaic going by mainstream use of English. Nonetheless, I love the word too for no clear reasons. You are welcome. Thanks for reading. I deeply appreciate your feedback. 🐎
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I think I last heard it in England. Thank you for that little horse in your reply!
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🔥🔥
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Good message, like the wordplay – and thanks for introducing me to the word ‘lollygagger’! I might start using it…
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Thank you for reading and for stopping by to leave a comment. Have a nice day!
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The procrastinator in me understands the message…now only if i would learn!!! Absolutely enjoyed reading your post =)
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Congratulations! I have nominated you for the “One Lovely Blogger Award”.
All good wishes,
Manuela
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Indolence has nothing to add to humanity than destruction. On the other hand, industry does not kill but refines and make wealthy.
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Congratulations! You have been nominated for the Sunshine Blogger Award! Please see the above link for more details!
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Thank you so much for the nomination. I will certainly check it out.
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You are so welcome!
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I have nominated you for One Lovely Blog Award.
Congratulations!!
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Wow! Thank you so much. I will check it out. Have a lovely day. 🌻
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Thanks Ayoka 🙂
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sweet vivid & wise 🙂
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Thanks for reading. Your feedback is deeply appreciated. Have a sweet day!
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Great post 😊 loving your theme colours too.
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Thank you!
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Wow!!!
I wish I could play with words like you.
Nice.
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I am sure you can do it. Thanks for your kind words. Have a nice day.💐
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🙂
I am learning from the best.
Have a lovely day.
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You too!
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A very observant poem. I am amazed at the amount of people who waste their own and everyone else’s time and then complain about how little they have or how boring their life is.
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Hey Kim, thanks for stopping by. Your comment brightened my day. Have a wonderful night/day. 🌼
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Short, but the message was passed. Really Expedient!! Great work
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate your feedback. Have a great day.
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This is outstanding plus the quote at the end is also excellent!!
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Thanks for your kind words. I deeply appreciate your comment. Have a wonderful evening. 🌷
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Thank you for your interest in my blog. I love your writing and look forward to following yours.
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You are welcome. You have an awesome blog. Have a wonderful day.
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You, too!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-!!!!! 🙂
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U r a godess of furtune n failure…amazing lines n true.weldone
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I like this line.
Stop idling your mind
Carving for your hands
A recipe for regret
Yesss!!!
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Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day.🌷
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Then you must be the winner
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts.I appreciate the feedback
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Lovely
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Thank you!😊
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Very good enjoyable read, I am going to reblog this one for you Sir.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles: Why people hate the truths' of the real world.
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Yes sir, okay sir. I hear you sir 👏🏾
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