Take me
Now or never
Subdue my yearnings
Like a heated argument
Unleash the lechery
Waiting in your reverie
Distort me
Like the liquor raging in me
Like a thousands suns burning
Take me urgently
And
Watch my rump
As you thump my derriere
Take me earnestly
And
Watch your back
As the charges come filing
Against you like the rain
© GBOLABO ADETUNJI/ AYOKA
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Powerful words😳
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Your words are kind as always. Thanks for stopping by. Have a great day.
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A very passionate and powerful piece, a little different from your other poems I feel. I like it!
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Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate your feedback. I am glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.
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I love it!
I am nominating you for the Three Days, Three Quotes challenge. Hope you don’t mind 🙂
Rules of the challenge:
1.Three quote for three days.
2.Three nominees each day(no repetition).
3.Thank the person who nominated you.
4.Inform the nominees.
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I do not mind at all. Thanks for the nomination.Have a beautiful day.
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Same to you! Have a great day 🙂
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Hi
I’ve nominated you for the 3 day 3 quote challenge. If you wish to accept, the rules are in the link:https://lifeisgood845.wordpress.com/2016/10/19/three-day-three-quotes-challenge-1/
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Thank you for the nomination. I will check out the link. Have a nice day.
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Strengthening and beautiful.
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Thank you for visiting. Have a great day!
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wow….he better take her…
ignore that, just my way of saying this was a good piece
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Lol. I would say he better not. She hinted that she might be filing charges afterwards. But, thanks for your kind words. Have a lovely day.
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yeah…saw that, was hoping i was wrong
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You might be right. Who knows with a woman’s mood? She doesn’t even know sometimes.
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true…
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A very beautiful, passionate and powerful post.
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Thank you for stopping by and for giving me your feedback. I appreciate your comments. Have a wonderful day.
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You r always welcome friend. Have a nice day.
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Very powerful and a well-crafted, chilling ending.
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Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts. Have a great day.
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